REALLY like the way you present the stories. I have recommended all your game to every friend I have with decent English reading ability! Wish to have more friends had play your game so they can discuss the stories with me, one way or and other.... Unilateral selling can be quite tiring at times!
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you sharing my game with your friends 😊 if you follow me on Tumblr, you can always gush about it with other followers or even me 😆
Thank you! It's based on an unfinished book I wrote years ago and it seemed perfect for IF 😊 The main character is however you imagine and Becks was supposed to be a popular, younger sister who's charm was only outweighed by her good looks. You can interpret the characters however you want them to look if you'd like to make fan art for it.
Really slick layout. Font was a little hard to read, but loved the inclusion of a dark mode and the creepy ambiance music! That final bit of a dialogue is chills up your spine spooky. Quite efficient use of the restricted narrative space to paint vivid relationships between the player and their family too. Lovely work.
Thank you! I had hoped to include more font options because I realised the default one was a bit difficult to read. Hopefully I'll get a chance to add it when time frees up for me. Really glad you enjoyed it 😊
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Hope there's more to play in the future. I'm loving the first few slides
Thanks! It's a jam entry, so it's currently complete. The idea is to have a longer version once I get the time.
Alright, I'll let you cook
Well, color me intrigued, just a few slides in and I'm hoping for more, thanks for this and I can't wait for the future of it!
Thank you for playing and I'm glad you found it intriguing! 🌼
ohhh i loved this! the presentation felt razor sharp and the atmosphere you cultivated in just a few short passages was amazing.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊
i think i mightve speedrun finishing this game in 3 - 5 move
It is less than 500 words, so it's not that long 😅
oh.
reading takes a long time ya'know?
REALLY like the way you present the stories. I have recommended all your game to every friend I have with decent English reading ability! Wish to have more friends had play your game so they can discuss the stories with me, one way or and other.... Unilateral selling can be quite tiring at times!
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you sharing my game with your friends 😊 if you follow me on Tumblr, you can always gush about it with other followers or even me 😆
You always make the best stories, Ramona 💕
Thank you! That means the world to me 😊 Thank you for your support 💖
if you do expand more and develop this into an IF, that would be so many kinds of AMAZING. I love what's here so much already!
Thanks! I most likely will make the game into a full game since I've been itching to wrote a supernatural IF once my other game's completed 😊
This is amazing, it makes me want to see more of this world!!
Thank you! Who knows? If people like the idea enough, I might make into a full game.
NO this is so good
pls make more
This has so much potencial i kinda want to make a comic or a fanart of this but without the characters description is kinda impossible
BUTTTTTTTTTTTT
This is so gooddddddd im following
Thank you! It's based on an unfinished book I wrote years ago and it seemed perfect for IF 😊 The main character is however you imagine and Becks was supposed to be a popular, younger sister who's charm was only outweighed by her good looks. You can interpret the characters however you want them to look if you'd like to make fan art for it.
Really slick layout. Font was a little hard to read, but loved the inclusion of a dark mode and the creepy ambiance music! That final bit of a dialogue is chills up your spine spooky. Quite efficient use of the restricted narrative space to paint vivid relationships between the player and their family too. Lovely work.
Thank you! I had hoped to include more font options because I realised the default one was a bit difficult to read. Hopefully I'll get a chance to add it when time frees up for me. Really glad you enjoyed it 😊