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when is the game finished ? or where can i buy it?

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I'm still working on the final chapter, and have the epilogue to go. It will be available for purchase on Steam in the first quarter of 2026 if all goes to plan ๐Ÿ˜Š

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I finished it before noticing the portraits availableโ€ฆ some look TOTALLY different, in my headโ€ฆ Okโ€ฆ Well. Significantly, anywayโ€ฆ Maybe just in ethnic appearance.

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The portraits here aren't the final version. You can find them on my main post on Tumblr here. When you mean ethnic in appearance, are you referring to certain characters not appearing how you imagined or how they're described in the text of the game?

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We need another, I'm talking a whole list, maybe with different starts to make different character arcs ourselves

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The game follows a linear story. Unfortunately, what you're asking is for a game outside the scope of what I can achieve as a solo developer.

omg I love it!!

Is this game available on Steam?

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It's still being worked on at the moment ๐Ÿ˜Š I'll make an announcement when it'll be available on Steam โ€“ likely by next year Q1.

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God, i cant belive i tried this game. i love it!!! (in chapter 5 as i write this) this needs more recognition. love you game developer

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Thank you so much for playing! I'm so happy you're enjoying the game!!

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i was so immerse in the story that i cried when we found mama ๐Ÿ˜ฟ๐Ÿ˜ฟ ANYWAYS, I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! delicious, scrumptious, and brought tears to my eyes. im looking forward for more chapters

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Thank you for playing and I'm so glad you're enjoying the game ๐Ÿ’– There won't be more chapters added to the public demo. I'm currently working on the final chapter so if you can't wait for the full release, you can always join my Patreon to play the rest of the chapters as they're completed.

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So, once it's done will the game be fully released to the public or no?

Yes, as a paid game.

10/10 this is one of the best stories ive read! Such a good game and i cant wait for it to be done. When the full game is released will it be available on android? I would love to be able to download it once its done, but i dont have a PC

Thank you so much ๐Ÿ’– I'll have to see how well the game does before deciding on an android release since it costs money to host the game on different stores. It'll be released on Steam when completed but it is technically designed for PC only at the moment.

Hello i wanted to ask how many chapters will the full game have? (Just a random question that i thought about rn and sorry if you already answered this question somewhere else or even here in the comments somewhere, also sorry for my grammar it may not be the best since English is not my first language)

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Hi, it'll be 12 chapters excluding the prologue and epilogue ๐Ÿ˜Š I'm currently working on Chapter 11 which should be completed this month then I'll start work on Chapter 12. There's still a lot of edits to complete but my aim is to complete everything for a late 2025 to early 2026 release.

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Because you indicated you were hoping for feedback when you made the two chapters public: it seemed like an oversight that I could thwart the alliance with the nomads by murdering my duel opponent and then it… just not come up again. At all.

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The option is there for role-playing purposes. It does have consequences for Chapter 12 and it is mentioned again when you return to Ishari but no one is going to hold it against the MC because the Nomad Tribes and Ishari have been clashing against each other for years. If you follow Anu's path, you're there to gather information on their weaknesses, not to build an alliance. Wars can be won in more than one way โ€“ at this point, people don't have time to sit around and mope about failures/lost chances because of the battle that's coming. I hope that clears it up for you! Please note this is also a first draft. Some scenes are bare-bones right now and will be fleshed out during edits.

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That was DELICIOUS! i got to both destiny with two mc and was shooked on both of them! Plot thickening! Even more! Lol.

you have my gratitude for allowing us to hate Salyra and love her despite everything and everything in between. I loved both routes. In both I can't hate Rana, but still its good that we can. I love this IF exactly for it allows mc many emotions or none at all. 

Our cousin is troubled young man and I hope that gentle approach to him will help... but I also don't think that this is always the answer. We'll see. I WAS HOPING THAT MY FAMILY JUST VISITING BUT ALAS this turn of events made my mc feral. Also Ama's initiative was not something I expected, and I loved uncle's reaction. I love him. I'm glad that mc can connect with that part of the family, I'm glad that mc can move on. It's not easy and not for everyone, but its here as an option and it's wonderful. 

As for romances IRUS I'VE MISSED YOU. still funny that he is the main RO for me. Well, what can I say, I'm here for trauma bonding (same parental situation! Same struggle) and for equally fun flirting. And devotion. And gay sex. I can go on like this.

Loved new information about world and our companions.

I'm glad that you had an opportunity to show us special content. Thank you very much! Will be here, waiting to buy full (eventually) game.

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Thank you so much for playing and I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I'm glad you're enjoying the range of emotions available and being able to hate on Salyra. Some of my favourite scenes to write are the angsty ones with her ๐Ÿ˜…

Zikar will be hurting for a while. The war has been affecting everyone differently and Part 4 is where you start to see how people are changing.

Irus is definitely a fan fave for a reason ๐Ÿ˜‹

Thanks for playing!

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Loved the "new" chapters. Salyra hate was excellent. Only little issue i had was the scene where Rana is hiding from the bullies, i would have loved a way to simply leave without interacting, but that's just a minor issue.

Also few minor issues i found:


"Cotten" should be "cotton", unless it's a material i haven't heard about.

Save: https://gofile.io/d/uLagbk


Dena got wrong prounoun

save: https://gofile.io/d/sConi7


I think there is a word missing here

Save: https://gofile.io/d/iXFWqD

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I'm glad you enjoyed Chapters 9 and 10! A lot of the scenes aren't fully fleshed out as yet. My main focus is getting the full game completed then I'll go back during edits to add more choices and flesh out certain scenes ๐Ÿ˜Š Thanks for the grammar/spelling issues! It's not my focus right now, as I'll fix them during edits but these are helpful!

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love this if so much you have no idea prince irus just does stuff to me. wishing men were real๐Ÿ’”

anyways could someone send the link for โ€œfar away from home acoustic verโ€because the links arenโ€™t working for me:(( itโ€™s so nice and beautiful I NEED IT

Sorry for the late reply! I just realised thr link doesn't work when I tested it myself. Here's the song.

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I really loved the story... One day I'll see the full story๐Ÿ™‚โ€โ†•๏ธ๐ŸŒธ

And thanks for the demonstration ๐Ÿ’–

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Thank you! Hopefully the full game will be out by the end of 2025 if all goes well ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Ahhhh, catching up on the update was so exciting!! Thank you!! I'm so eager for what happens next ๐Ÿ™‡๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ

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Im so glad you enjoyed it! Some rescuing and final battles ensue so just two more chapters and the game will be done ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Wonderful news! Thank you! Will be here waiting for access to some chapters haha ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Just over 24 hours to go ๐Ÿ˜Š

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I can't wait for the day the game fully out and I can finally buy them! Great story and I'm completely hooked up when I first download the demo version! 

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you're enjoying the game ๐Ÿ’–

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hi,do you have a Steam page?

I do, but it's not set up as yet for the game.

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I've played the demo multiple times and I also follow your tumblr, but I've been so busy working I haven't had time to see about any new updates.

Dena.... is going to be a LI!?!?!? Wooooo!!!! I've loved him since he helped Aena (my MC) out when she was younger. Mwah! 

However, Irus will always have a special place in my heart. He's such a good LI. 

Now I'm off to play Sir Oren's route again! Lol. I may end up getting the patreon later on just to get the updates. XD But I will definitely be paying for the full IF once it's finished. :) 

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Thank you so much for playing! I fell in love with Dena the moment I write that scene in the prologue then I instantly thought, gosh, wouldn't it be nice to smooch Dena so here we are ๐Ÿ˜†

Some good news on the horizon, the demo will be available for a limited time in December up until Chapter 10 so if you're tight on cash, you can always wait until 21 December.

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amazing story, can't believe it took me playing like fifty other IFs to reach this lol

Thank you! I'm so glad you found your way to the game and enjoyed it ๐Ÿ’–

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Definitely one of the best IF's I've ever played! I've been hooked on it for the past couple of days, and while it is unfortunate that the public demo only extends to Chapter 8, I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the chapters turn out!

(Yap session below, read at your own expense ๐Ÿ™‚ )

As I stated previously, this is one of the IF's I've ever played! Everything, from the plot, to the music, and the writing was done to a T! I loved the descriptive words, and it was clear that you put a ton of effort into this IF, it puts most others on this website to shame.

As far as the characters (companions in specific) go, I absolutely loved their personalities, and I was conflicted as to who I should romance (at least in the early chapters, 3-4 I believe), since I liked Iri, Sir Oren, and Ellie, both as romance options and characters! (Iri my beloved ๐Ÿ˜‡ I didn't have it in me to flirt with all three, it felt wrong ๐Ÿ˜ญ)

I could honestly go on and on about everything that I liked about the game, but if I did, this comment would probably take up half the page. But it was worth every hour of my time, and I hope that I'll be able to buy the full game when it gets released! You're a great author, and I hope nothing but the best for you!

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Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I'm so happy you enjoyed what was available to play in the public demo. I'm already working on Chapter 11 out of 12, so hopefully the full game will be available in the next year or so.

I'm so pleased you enjoyed the writing! I've always enjoyed fantasy and political stories but I was afraid of writing my own, so this was a leap of faith for me. It helps that I love ancient history so research wasn't as boring as some might think. I think Irus has always been a fan favourite and he continues to be a fan favourite. I love him to bits so it's good to know you do too! And I'm happy you enjoyed the different personalities of the ROs.

Thank you again for playing and if you ever have any questions, comments or feedback, feel free to reach out here or through my Tumblr.

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