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When your village is razed to the ground, you're left fleeing with an exiled prince. You can trust no one but each other. Your father's dying wish was to protect the prince, but can you really trust a man who was exiled from his kingdom?

Journey across the borders in search of allies. But in this deadly game of treachery and deceit, there is more than just the prince's life at stake. Will you flee from the past that haunts you or will you embrace the fate that awaits you?

The decision is yours.


Crown of Exile is an 18+ interactive fiction game, with its main focus being on character development and interactions with NPCs. It is intended for mature audiences and will contain scenes of violence, mild sexual themes and vulgar language. Follow the game development on my blog.

For extra content and early access to the game demo, make sure to become a Patron.

Public Demo: Prologue - Chapter Eight.
Please note that there will be no further updates to the public demo. All future chapters will be released only for my Patrons.


Features:

  • Play as male or female.
  • Romance or befriend one of four characters.
  • Uncover the shrouded history of your past.
  • Delve into politics and scheming.
  • Help the exiled prince reclaim his throne.
  • Flee from your past or embrace your fate.


Characters:

  • Prince Irus (he/him - romanceable): Prince Irus is the illegitimate child of King Erlan and a low-born noblewoman. Stubborn and headstrong, Prince Irus believes that the throne of Cyre belongs to him. He is determined to reclaim his rightful place as King, regardless of what anyone says.


  • Queen Elora (she/her - romanceable): Queen Elora is the ruler of Vinia, a neighbouring kingdom to Cyre. Queen Elora is charming and attractive, but beneath her beauty is a cunning woman who wields her power with expertise.

  • Sir Oren (he/him - romanceable): Sir Oren is the captain of the guard of the Vinian Royal Guard. While Sir Oren can come across as straitlaced, he can be kind and generous to those he respects.


  • Anu (she/her - romanceable): Anu is a Priestess of Ehulla and believes that the only way to end the war between Ishari and Cyre is through bloodshed. Brash and unafraid of confrontation, Anu will fight for what she believes in.


Things to note:

  • The game is written using UK English so if a few words seem to be spelt incorrectly - it's likely because of this.
  • The game is currently a work in progress - what you are seeing is the first draft. There will be options added and scenes expanded in the full game.
  • The gender choice will be restricted to male and female options - there will be options for body choices in NSFW scenes as the need arises.
  • Some choices will not be implemented in the game - suggestions are welcome but there is no guarantee that I will add them in the game.
  • The full game will be a paid game - depending on its popularity, the game might be available for android users. Otherwise, it will be released strictly for PC users.
  • There will be additional DLCs once the full game is complete - these DLCs will be separate from the main game as they are not required to complete the main plot.
  • The game focusses on a narrative and character-driven based plot opposed to a stat-based plot. Stats play a role, but they are not the main focus of the game - it will be difficult to fail tasks.
  • Negative responses to characters will be limited to character-relation interactions - this is easier for me to write and because the plot is fairly linear.

Credits:

Writing and Coding: Ramona G.

Character art made using ArtBreeder.

All in-game images and backgrounds made using Canva.

Game page background by liuzishan on Freepik.

Music from Pixabay.

Game cover designed by Ludmila.

StatusIn development
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.8 out of 5 stars
(502 total ratings)
AuthorRamona G.
GenreInteractive Fiction
TagsCharacter Customization, Fantasy, Meaningful Choices, Mystery, NSFW, Romance, Twine

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This is pretty well solid and well-written. The only small issue I had with this IF is that the MC... is kind of too tamed. Even if you try to choose the "aggressive" dialogue options, It's still lukewarm, like when meeting Esmo again. Weird to see the MC almost getting hit by just standing still and waiting for someone to rescue them. Would love to see the MC being more proactive. Either way, good luck and thank you for taking the time to make this.

Thank you for taking the time to play the game 😊 Yes, I do know there's not a lot of 'aggressive' choices and I hope to add more variations to scenes when I do the full edits with additional scenes and dialogues. For now, this is a rough draft so you won't get to see everything. I'll keep your feedback in mind for the edits 🌼

i think about this if all the time honestly thank you writing such masterpiece πŸ₯Ή

Thank you! That's very kind of you to say and I'm so happy you're enjoying it πŸŒΌπŸ’–

I played this a little while ago and it is so good!! I can't wait for more <3

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Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it πŸ’– The game will be updated for Patrons from Chapter 9 onwards and the full game will be released on Steam and here respectively 😊

Can't wait!

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I hope that's a good more πŸ˜… The game will be updated for my Patreon only going forward.

I'm so pissed! This game has no right being this good.

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it 😊

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Ramona I cannot explain in words with how good this is! The storyline is just perfection from the beginning I didn't know how to feel on my first gameplay but as I kept playing and playing, I couldn't help but make several save files just to replay it you inspired me to make my own story though not game because I don't kind of don't know how to code. I want to wish you an early Valentine's Day and make sure to always take time to yourself, thanks for making this amazing game! Cannot wait for the full release and I will be finally able to download it!!!!!

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I really enjoyed your game a lot. I look forward to the full game already. By the way when will you be accepting new signups on Patreon? I would love to support your great work!😊

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Thank you! πŸ’–πŸ˜Š It will reopen on the 1st of March 2024.

Replayed this and I forgot how much I hate the mom πŸ˜’ also can't wait until its fully out. πŸ˜ƒ

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I think everyone's a Salyra hater by now πŸ˜… Thank you for playing!

This is a genuinely great game, just kind of sad that I couldn't be as petty as I wished since I'm a petty bitch LOL! Would definitely love some options where you could give someone the silent treatment.

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Thank you for playing! I will be adding more options and responses for the full game so keep an eye out to play a petty MC πŸ˜‹

Thank you for playing! I will be adding more options and responses for the full game so keep an eye out to play a petty MC πŸ˜‹

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Really good game I love it and the prince so much and i am the only one who want to slap mc mom? >_> she is a real hoe ... kinda a bad mom too or daughter she even haven't told her mom

Thank you for playing 🌼 I'm so happy you enjoyed the game and Prince Irus! You're definitely not alone in hating Salyra πŸ˜‹

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I finally got around to reading chapter 8, and the Elora scene πŸ₯΅? Thank you ma'am! I love her route so much, as tempting as Anu is idk if I'll ever be able to do her route with Elora distracting me. 100% gonna buy this when it's finished!


oh and when we met her cousin, and i said we were just friends and she was like "UMMMM NO" πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­

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I'm so glad you enjoyed Elora's scene! I wasn't sure if it would be spicy or detailed enough so it's good to know you liked it πŸ˜„ Thanks for playing!

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Oops, what I meant to say was it was terrible and you should totally go back and make it much longer and more detailed πŸ˜‰ (/s ofc... Unleeeeesss πŸ‘€) 

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I really enjoyed this game and can't wait for the full release. 

I have one suggestion tho. In chapter 8, when meeting Emos again, it feels a bit off that a MC with a high might stat just stands there and waits for the pain instead of trying to doge or block the hit, so maybe change the text form "You brace yourself for the pain..." to something like "you move to block the hit / try to doge as person X steps between you to" if the MC has a high might stat.

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Thanks for playing and I'm glad you're enjoying it! The game is in a very rough draft state so you're not going to see different flavour text based on skills but expect to see it in the final version 😊

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Sad that i couldnt do the cgaracter i was looking foward to, but still a REALLY good game, sad that i dont talk too much in conversations

Can I ask what character you were hoping to play? Thanks for giving the game a try!

Its kust a silly thing, i wanted a more "Hollow" character that would train way sooner to avenge his mother, but dont worry about me

Ah, I'm sorry 🌼 I tried my best to add as many personality choices as I could but I always struggled with the stoic/hollow options. That said, if you've reached Chapter 5, there's really no point for vengeance πŸ˜…

Just finished it and omg I cannot wait for more! it had me crying at times. which you deserve applause for bc I'm not usually an emotional person lol. I also love Irus so much I don't think I can try anyone else now lol

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Thank you for playing! I'm pleased that the game and plot made you feel what the MC was feeling and I'm really glad you're enjoying Irus' route 😊 

Amazing! Im ganna b a patreon, im hooked!

Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying it and thank you for considering to subscribe to my Patreon πŸ˜Š

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I just finished the demo and romanced Irus and I loved his romance/NSFW scene they are so well written tho since Irus has to become king he will eventually need heirs I'm guessing and since I'm playing a male MC I wonder how it will work out πŸ€”

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I'm so happy you're enjoying his romance! There is no need for natural heirs - adoption is very much a thing in the game world. There's also the fact that in Cyre, rulers can choose to appoint their successor who doesn't have to be their child. That said, Irus does not want to become a father - there's a lot more explanation on my Tumblr so you can browse through that if you're interested 😊

Oh thanks I will definitely check out your Tumblr !

This is by far the most detailed and beautifully made interactive story I have ever read. Do you by chance have any suggestions of any books that you think have some of the elements shown in this story or from which you were inspired to write this?

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Thank you for your kind words! I actually wasn't inspired by novels to write this game but rather my interest in ancient civilisations like Sumeria, Egypt and Greece. From there, I adapted the game's idea with some elements from various other ancient nations and that's how the game came about πŸ˜… My real life has taken away my time for reading so I've not read anything remotely related to the game since I first started developing it.  You can read up on the three main ancient civilisations but I'm not sure how interesting it might be for you πŸ˜†

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I LOVE Irus!! There's so much romantic content, I'm unused to such romantic depth (like talking to Redall first on the boat causing Irus to be jelly, just lots of fun flavor text + nice moments) and it's not even finished yet! ^^

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Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying Irus' romantic route and his romance scenes 😊 I wanted to write a fantasy/political romance game, although I much prefer just writing romance all the time πŸ˜…

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OMG I love it. The setting is great and it reminds me of arcadie second born. Can't wait for the full game.

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Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the game so much πŸ˜Š

adding the ending scene with irus at the end of chap 8 to the millionth time a nsfw scene has made me cry, i love my mc and him so bad it makes me sick !! so excited to get the full version someday <3

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I'm glad you enjoyed the scene with Irus! Thank you for playing and for your support πŸ’–

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HEARTBROKEN that this is the end for the demo updates, but you can bet your ass I'm going to buy the game once it's released on steam. You don't understand how much I love Irus this game. (Hint: It's a LOT.)

Thank you for all the amazing content and fun interactions here and on your blog! It's been a pleasure to enjoy the demo so far and I can only imagine the full game will be amazing as well. Much love~ <3

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Thank you so much! πŸ’– I'll still be posting fun tidbits on the blog and definitely continue answering asks. I'm so happy you found Irus' romance route to be enjoyable and hopefully, the full game won't disappoint with his romance.  Thank you for your support and make sure to send an ask if you're ever curious about the game or even the progress!

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hi Ramona

just completed the game a few hours ago again and i stil really like it. chapter 8 was great, especially Eloras intimate scene. for me it was perfect.


before i ask my questions i would like to compliment you for your writing/writing style. i already knew the story (up to chapter 8) but i was still sad when ahlf died and was still surprised at the plottwist in ishari, to name some examples. also its impressive how easy it is to imagine the scenes you describe in our own head.


now to my questions:

1.A.) this time it was the first time i unlocked my divinity. it added a new stat-bar to the other 3 (might/leadership/politics). since divinity seems to be tied more in the story, does this mean the number/percentage you have in this stat will affecting the story more than the other 3 stats?

B.) so far there was only one opportunity to train your divinity (on the ship towards the southern isles; it got me from 50 => 55). in this case the option was quite obviously, it literally said "train your divinity". will it be always an obviously choice to improve the divinity-stat or will they become more and more  "secreter" (e.g. options says somethng like "train with Anu" vs "train with Sir Oren" =>  depending on whom you choose you either imrpove the Divinity-stat or warfare/might-stat)-


2.) in the prologue/chapter 1 you can get a statue of an ancient one from a merchant. i chose the one who represent death/fighting (im sorry for not remembering the name). so far i didnt noticed anything in regards of this choice. will it matter in future chapters? or did i miss something?


3.A.) this is my only critique/request in chapter 8 i have. before embarking the ship and sailing tothe Southern Isles you have a choice to go and say goodby to one of the given choices. while i understand that MC is under time pressure i really wished that we had an opportunity to say a quick goodbye to Rana (and optional to her father too). => personal idea: give her the statue you got from the merchant and say something like "keep it safe until im back".  maybe i just want to have more interactions with her since there are almost none in chapter 7.

B.) spoiler ahead so dont read if you didnt played the game so far...

when you decide to meet your mothers new family, you can choose to become close to Rana but not to her father (again, sorry for not remembering his name). i chose this option in my game, but always wondered what exactly this means. does this mean i/MC will ignore her father? or will i be able to have a friendly relationship with him, while having a sisterly relation with Rana & a motherly with my mother?


4.) can you maybe give an estimate timeframe how long the game will take until its final release? please dont get me wrong, i rather wait longer and having fleshed out story than a rushed one.



EDIT: just read some older comments and i stumpled across one, where you mentioned a free bonus game, which functions as a sequel. do you have any informations about that one, which you can share?



once again thank you very much for such a wonderful game & story. 

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Thank you so much for your kind words! I always wonder if I'm describing the scenes enough because sometimes it feels like it's not enough to help readers understand what I'm trying to convey, so it's nice to know that I am 😊

  1.  A. No stat is more important than another. The divinity stat comes into play if you choose to worship the deities (Solus or the Ancient Ones). But you're not going to be punished if you don't worship the deities. The divinity stat will open up more options for the MC to complete tasks, but it won't cause you to fail at the end goal of the game if you don't pursue it.

    B. It will be a mix of both, it's not so much a secret that if you choose to train with Anu and you've unlocked your divinity, you'll be able to get some help from her (considering she also has divine blessings) to train it too. But there'll also be choices like the one in Chapter 8 that will be more direct. At this point, it's a very rough draft version of the demo, so I'll come back during edits to include more options to increase stats.
  2. It's there for flavour text, nothing more than that. Sorry πŸ˜… This might change during edits depending on feedback I receive from testers but for now, it's just something you carry.
  3. A. The idea is that you don't have time to speak with many people - including Rana. Chapter 8 is all about the Southern Islands so you won't see much of Ishari in it or the people from there. Chapter 9 is the family chapter (it's what I refer to it as) because that's when you will get tons of family time (and drama). I didn't add the option to say goodbye to more than one person because of time constraints, but it'll be added during edits. Rana doesn't care for an idol but you can offer to bring her a gift from the Southern Islands. I'll be adding more interactions with her once edits start so rest assured you will get more time with her (eventually).

    B. It means that you choose to have a relationship with Rana but not Danzor or Salyra. You won't be forced to play happy family with Salyra or Danzor - but you can play the older sibling role for Rana.
  4. About two years or a little more than thatπŸ˜… There's four more chapters and an epilogue to write - that combined with my IRL job, it's going to take me a while.

It's not really a sequel of the game, more of a DLC detailing the time after the war and dealing with what comes after the alliances etc. I'll probably release the prologue either today/tomorrow for the public because I won't have time to work on it for a while.

Thank you for your support and I hope that answered your questions!

thank you very much for answering my questions. 

since you mentioned it, here a quick question: can you still bring a gift for Rana, even if you didnt spoke to her before departing?

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No, that will only be triggered if you speak to her 😊

I loved this storyline and game so much πŸ’Œ

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the plot and game 😊 Thanks for the kind comment and for playing!

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id pay $20 dollars to play it on here ^^

It won't cost nearly that much when it's completed πŸ˜†

okay ^w^

I am really enjoying the update so far. However, I just got to the Southern Islands and it's not registering Dena's gender for me. I am getting $DGender whenever the character is brought up. Not sure if I am the only one experiencing this (I was going to report this on the 'bug' form, but I am unable to choose chapter 8 on it at this time lol).

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Did you restart the game? The variable was added to the prologue which is where it's set so if you haven't replayed the prologue where you meet Dena and choose their gender, the $DGender variable will show up - that said, has it come up in any other instance? If not, it might just be that one variable is incorrect on my part πŸ˜…

Ah I'm sure that is the issue then. I just loaded my save and went from there. I'll restart and see if it comes up again, but I doubt it will. Thanks! πŸ˜…

No problem! 😊

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Update was amazing!  Can't wait for the full release!

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Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed it 🌼

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Curious if there's plans to make a Chapter 8 apk for android (Love the game btw!)

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For now, I've removed the apk due to the fact that I hadn't had time to update it with Chapter 8. I'll probably create one eventually, but for now, it's only available for desktop/pc though you can still play the game on your phone on itch.io 😊

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good God my love for Irus is bordering unhealthy frfr

TMI time - so i'm in an unhappy relationship and something happened and i have been crying since morning even after doing things for distraction now tell me why my brain just suggested "guess it's time to see Irus then" and tell me why i did exactly that and tell me why it actually worked?? Irus said 'beloved' and suddenly my tears backtracked into my eyes?? the sky cleared up?? my missing cat came back home?? (okay he didn't he's still missing but ya get my point sad lol)

my point is I JUST NEED IRUS IN MY LIFE IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR </3

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I'm happy that Irus could make you feel better and I'm sorry you're going through such a hard time IRL. Sometimes, it's easier to just relax with fictional men to cheer you up πŸ˜… I'm really sorry about your missing cat, I know what it's like to lose your pet. Cats are notorious for disappearing for days and even weeks on end, and I hope that your cat gets back to you! Thank you for playing and I'm sending my virtual love that everything works out for you 🌸

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aah thank you! and i'm sorry about your pet :( my cat's been missing for couple months now but i'm not losing hope! <3

fictional men are truly a blessing fr and Irus omg IRUS like when i need to escape from reality i usually turn to my fav VN or IF and stalking your tumblr or replaying sweet moments with Irus are included in my usual escape routes lol 

 i've commented few months ago to declare my love to Irus and it stands true till this day ayy if life isn't so harsh and money isn't so tight i'd truly love to support you on Patreon :" for now i can only pray that you'd be blessed with health and good night sleep and your fav food whenever you're craving it! <3

you have no idea how amazed i am of your mind like gaahh you've created my ideal man like that's my ideal man right there!!! *manifesting hard for IRL Irus to come and get me outta herreee*

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Thank you so much for your support! I know I say this a lot, but honestly, it's players like you that make writing an interactive fiction game worthwhile. I enjoy writing but sometimes, it gets really hard to want to write variations of scenes and then I see all the sweet comments and support from everyone and it makes it easy to push through and continue writing. Please don't feel pressured to support me on Patreon - I am grateful to those who can, but it's not what I live for. I live for comments like yours that make me realise that I'm not some crazy person who's writing something no one wants to play. Irus is really based on all my trashy-teen romances that I used to write when YA novels were still what my life revolved around - he's a little more mature than the teen-fiction love interests I used to write, but he's made up of all the good bits that made me swoon so I'm glad you're enjoying him ❀️️

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ahh at the end of the day we all just lil creatures who thrive on trashy teen romance lmao <3 also, i write for myself, like, just making up fantasy worlds for me to read before sleep, i suck af but that's how i know that writing is HARD! i truly respect you and every IF author who creates magical stories in their head then share it with the world <3 ALSO nooo you're not crazyyy stay stronggg <3 and if it's any help, it's IF like yours that helps me taking steps away from the brink of madness. i mean it, truly, no exaggeration. i was at a low point in my life when i found the world of interactive novel and it quickly became my escapism. life still hasn't gotten any better but i cope by manifesting all the good things i've read in IFs and IRUS THE LOVE OF MY LIFE OF COURSE IM MANIFESTING IRUS ILL KEEP GOING IF IT MEANS ILL EVENTUALLY MEET MY OWN IRUS  <333

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this is my first time commenting on anything but i just had to. i'm so very much in love with the story and especially, Elora! i must say i adore your writing and your attention to detail while doing it, something about the companionship in this game -and again, especially the relationship with Elora brings me so much comfort. this may be one of my favourite IF game ever and i can't wait for the next chapters! thank you so much for sharing your amazing work, i couldn't have asked for a better game to spend my entire night (yes, i have finished the game within 5+ hours and now it's almost 4 am hhahhaha!)

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Thank you so much for playing and I'm honoured you felt so strongly to leave a comment β€οΈοΈ If you're enjoying Elora, Chapter 8 will be a lot of fun for you because there's a lot of her - especially if you're romancing her. Companionship was something I knew I wanted to be a big part of the relationship dynamics so it's been really fun to write and I'm happy that you're enjoying it. The next update is already out for my Patrons, but it will be released here for the public on the 1st of January. I hope you do get enough sleep after playing the entire thing! Thank you again for your support πŸ˜Š

no worries at all, i wanted to share my feelings to let you know how incredibly fond of i am with your work ❀️️ i AM romancing Elora and i can't wait to see the next chapter! i think you are doing a wonderful job with the relationship dynamics, i love that it's not shallow at all and there are depths to each character and the way they react to situations. and i love that it will be released a day before my birthdayπŸ₯Ί i checked out your Tumblr page after playing it (cuz i needed to consume everything about this game hahahah) and saw that this game will be on Steam? can't wait for that!!! i also wanted to message u on tumblr because there are so many other things i want to tell u but i thought it'd be too much πŸ˜­πŸ˜­thank you so much for being so kind to reply to me!!! and nope, i didn't get enough sleep because this game is all i can think about hahahaha!!!! β€οΈοΈ β€οΈοΈβ€οΈοΈβ€οΈοΈ

Aww, thank you! Seriously, message away. I'm on leave for the holiday period from work, so I'm a lot more active now on Tumblr than I have been for the past few weeks and since the chapter is complete, I have some time to respond to messages 😊 You can ask me whatever you want on Tumblr, I really don't mind.

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When is the next update? just asking and I love this game very enjoyable

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Chapter 8's release dates can be found here 😊 Essentially, it'll be the 1st of January 2024.

I'm so excited for this thank you for giving us this :)

You're welcome and thank you for your support 😊

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Elora, I will see you soon! πŸ₯Ή

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Yes, you will 😊

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but seriously tho, great game, cant wait for the next update! :D

Thank you! I'm so pleased you're enjoying the game 🌼

Hey is there any walkthrough to get through an optimal path by any chance?

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There is no optimal path 😊 So there is no walkthrough. The game doesn't rely heavily on stats, but more so on certain choices. It will be very hard to get a bad ending so don't stress about your choices. If there's something in particular that you want to achieve, just let me know and I'll be happy to help!

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got soooo excited when the cover changes thinking it was a chap update 😭😭😭 Don't rush, take your time IK chapter eight is goin be gooood

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The cover change is because I've finally gotten the official cover for Steam so I was excited to use it 😊 Expect the update in approximately two and a half weeks. The current Chapter 8 is around 89K words and there's still a few scenes to complete before it's ready but hopefully it's not too long of a wait! Thank you for being so supportive πŸ’– 

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OMG MERRY CRHISTMASSS β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

sups excited <3

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Yes! I look forward to more of prince Irus. <3

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YOU’RE UPDATING IT? OH MY GOD THIS IS SOMETHING I CARE ABOUT 

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Wait wait, STEAM? as in, this game is coming to STEAM? hell yeah

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Yes, eventually it will be released there 😊 I've already got the page waiting for me to upload stuff so once the game is completed, that will be my main focus so I can get the game ready for wishlists πŸŽ‰

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just wanted to come on here and comment that ive played though this two times now and i still love it! The story is amazing and I adore all the characters (especially Irus) I can’t wait to see more of the game

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Thank you do much! I'm hopeful for a Christmas release for Chapter 8 - depending on how long I take to write the last few scenes πŸ˜… Thanks for playing!

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not Irus and MC living double lives. Both dad's died, both mom's ran off and became priestesses like hey twinnn 😝

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Their lives are very similar πŸ˜‹ It is on purpose and plays on the theme of fate and their journey together.

Ramona G. will you be doing a windows version soon or will it just be for mobile because I don't have an android and I really want to download this game because it's so goood!

Currently, you can play the game on your PC online - I've not put a downloadable version of the game itself other than the apk because it's not yet complete and there's still a lot that needs to be edited. Chapter 8 is the last chapter of the public demo so once that's done (hopefully before the end of the year), I'll be able to post the downloadable versions - even for PC 😊

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Wow!! What a great read and it is still in its  early draft/demo phase??!! Damn! Can't wait to see how the story grows. 

Kudos to the creator(or to the team if it is), keep it up, this is a gem!!! 

Queen Elora is absolutely my favorite and am smiling wide like an idiot in the flirting scenes. 

SPOLIER!! 

The fact that she wants to court the MC and the first time she asks MC to call her elora!! Muahhh! Chefs kiss. Heres hoping for more spicier scenes with elora in chapter 8 ;)

Question : how does this compare to Anu's romance line, i would think since she was introduced later in the story she and MC would have a long way to go.. Or is it quick paced? Just wanted to know, i am gonna try her route as well nonetheless. 

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Thank you so much for playing 🌼 I really appreciate your support and I'm super glad you're enjoying the game, even in its early stages!

I'm just a lonesome game dev, so no team involved here πŸ˜† Thank you!

I'm so happy you're enjoying Elora's scenes! I always doubt the ROs scenes that aren't for Irus since I rarely get feedback about them. I'm happy you love her romance route 😊

There will be a guaranteed spicy scene in Chapter 8 and you'll also get a bit more background with her family in the Southern Islands. So look out for the end of next month πŸ˜„

Anu's route will really pick up speed in Part 3 of the game, she's much like Irus in that she will go after someone if she likes them regardless of how long they've spent with each other 😊 She's more kiss first, then come the talks of a relationship afterwards. I personally love her route since it's definitely filled with more innuendos πŸ˜†

THANK YOU!! for creating this wonderful read, and Hats off to you for the fact that you are doing this single handedly!

Can't wait to learn more about Elora and her story.


I am definitely playing again to try Anu's route and if you do not mind is there any specific date for the next update ? so that i can make a note of it. Thanks again for taking your time to reply.

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I can't give a definite date. If you can, follow me on Tumblr because it's where I post about my progress and more accurate dates for the updates 😊 I hope for an end-of-November/early December release - Chapter 8 is partially available on my Patreon to play as well if you can't wait that long.

Thanks for your comment!

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Nice to see another Elora fan. Seriously can't wait for Chapter 8.

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I'm so close to being done with Chapter 8 πŸ’– Expect the first NSFW with Elora in the update!

Welcome fellow Elora fan 😁

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Spoilers ahead. 

Ah, I want to love the game, I truly do, but I cannot help but be a little disappointed with it. Starting with MC herself, who has no notable skills, yet somehow ends up protecting and advising the prince. But maybe she will get some sort of power later on, who knows, the game is not yet done, but still, it is an odd choice. Especially since her father was a high-ranked military man and could have easily trained her on either warfare, strategy or a bit about history/politics (depending on the choice made by the player, or just as a part of the story). That however I could ignore, since I do enjoy the writing style and sometimes you just read and write and play for fun. And the game is a lot of fun. Or rather, it could be. The biggest issue I have with The Crown of Exile is that it is supposed to be an "interactive fiction" and yet it feels like the choices influence nothing, save for the romance scene. No matter which option I choose for Alfh, the MC and her father note that they never shared a daughter-father bond and that it was impossible since she was her mother's daughter (yet she spent most of her childhood with him, Syl and Ishari had minimal influence over MC). No matter how blunt and crude MC is towards Irius, they seem to be best of friends a few scenes later (there is one choice where Mc can say that she won't forgive him for calling her "just a fisherman's daughter" and it is never mentioned again nor does it really change the relationship). Idk, as it is now, the game is more of a story than an IF game. And while it is not necessarily bad, both the overview of the story and the tags gave me completely different expectations. 

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I'm sorry you feel that way about the plot and game! Unfortunately, this is not a stat heavy IF, but s more narrative IF so you're making choices but following the same script. I dislike stat heavy IF games and prefer allowing players to choose whatever choices they want without being locked from choosing something simply because of earlier choices. 

As for Ahlf not training the MC, this was answered on my Tumblr. Ahlf hated his military background and didn't want to return to that by teaching the MC how to fight - he also had a hard time with the MC in general being their child. It's a complicated family relationship that creates a lot of turmoil for him as a character.

Have you reached Part of the game? There's something called divine blessings and you can unlock that skill later on.

That said, if this isn't to your liking, that's completely fine. I know that the game won't be for some and you giving it a try is enough 😊

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I get it, I kinda dislike IF games that heavily rely on stats too, but at the same time, those games usually have a high replay value, since the routs differ from one another significantly. But I know those can be taxing on the reader and it really boils down to personal preferences. 

See, I don't really follow your Tumblr and as far as I know, there was no mention of it in the story. Again, I know this is not the finished product, so it is possible you plan to include that, 

One last thing, I just wanted to appreciate how you've chosen to reply. It's heartening to see authors who won't tear a reader apart after some criticism. And while I might not be the biggest fan of the game, I do hope the game becomes a success. It's clear that you've put a lot of effort and love into writing this story. 

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It's no trouble at all! For now, this is a very, very rough draft. I've not gone back to include extra scenes and flavour texts for most things because it slows me down when I'm writing. My plan is to have the full game complete and then I'll be doing a long and arduous beta testing where I'll ask for more nuanced feedback where I can incorporate extra options and variations 😊

The Tumblr should be linked on the game page, here on itch.io. I haven't included my Tumblr in the game or promoted it that much so I don't blame you if you've not seen it.

I'm not new to the world of writing (fictional and academic), so I've gotten used to handling criticism from readers. You made some really good points, which I hope the final editing phase can address better. Thank you again for giving the game a try and leaving your feedback!

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SORRY BUT ACTUALLY πŸ€“β˜

Spoilers aheeead!

I took this comment WAY too personally because these accusations are just... wrong. 

First off, you continue to use she/ her pronouns for MC. You get to choose the gender for MC so it's better to use they/them, but that's neither here nor there.

"Starting with MC herself, who has no notable skills, yet somehow ends up protecting and advising the prince."

This is just plain incorrect. One of the first stat impacting choices you get to make is if you wat to increase you leadership, politics, or warfare knowledge. MC is a person who develops skills. Like, you know, a human. Also, it is foreshadowed throughout the story that MC has some sort of connection with the Ancient one's, because of their eyes, and their mom. NOT TO MENTION in chapter even we LITERALLY WIELD Astes heart! :/

"...her father was a high-ranked military man and could have easily trained her on either warfare, strategy or a bit about history/politics..."

Now, did you just skin through the letters, or what? It is made PERFECTLY CLEAR when you question Ahlf about his past and read the letters he kept in the Jade box that he was kicked off of the blood guard for his romantic escapades with Salyra. He left the past of being a blood guard behind him when it impacted him and his loved one. He kept MC distant as not to hurt them. WHY would he teach them to be a human blood hound when that was not what he himself wanted to associate with. Heck! The prologue shows in itself how badly the parents wanted to keep MC away from the blood guard! Not face them, but keep them away.

"The biggest issue I have with The Crown of Exile is that it is supposed to be an "interactive fiction" and yet it feels like the choices influence nothing, save for the romance scene. No matter which option I choose for Alfh, the MC and her father note that they never shared a daughter-father bond and that it was impossible since she was her mother's daughter (yet she spent most of her childhood with him, Syl and Ishari had minimal influence over MC)."

The choices DO influence SO MUCH. MC can choose to have a more aggressive and defiant relationship with Ahlf or a more compliant and cooperative relationship. They could never have a real father-child relationship because of AHLF. He PUSHED MC way as he describe in his letter he leaves after he died! I'm not sure what the parenthesis mean but if you're saying that they spent majority of their childhood with Ahlf Cyre culture didn't affect them, it's because of how cast out MC was due to the Isharian Cyrian war and how you are able to tell through their eyes. If you're refrencing the chunk of their childhood MC spent with Salyra, MC says themself when they arrive at the Isharian temple that their mothers teachings has been long forgotten and now just a foggy memory!

"No matter how blunt and crude MC is towards Irius, they seem to be best of friends a few scenes later (there is one choice where Mc can say that she won't forgive him for calling her "just a fisherman's daughter" and it is never mentioned again nor does it really change the relationship)."

They have to work together, it is obvious that they would need to hold some semblance of a relationship. Irus won't like, romance, or defend MC if you aren't flirtatious or kind enough to him. The choices ARE impactful. That scene about the fisherman's daughter is a grudge being held against Irus. When it comes to being on the run from a blood thirsty king and his blood thirsty army, that insult is MINOR.

Honestly it feels like you skimmed through the fist two chapters and then started typing! I don't mean to sound rude or aggressive at all, I just felt inclined to defend these terrible points that are COMPLETELY inaccurate with my life because this story and author ate down.

Thank you!

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I always play as a female MC, so that's probably why I used the she/her pronouns. It is clear in the description that you can choose the gender, and the author did not correct me, so I don't think it's a huge deal. However, if the author decides otherwise I will happily correct my comments. 

It's not like the choice makes her a skilled fighter or advisor, so it changes nothing. Still, no notable skills are to be seen.

 If she became the protector/advisor later on, as she gains the prince's trust and knows what she is doing, once she develops any skills whatsoever,  then that would have been a different story.  But having a literal child with little to no, if any, fighting/diplomacy skills and any knowledge of the outside world protecting the most important person in the story, is an odd choice. Or just a choice that requires too much suspension of disbelief?  

Admittedly, I did not go as far as chapter eleven, as the story was clearly not meant for me. And I did read it some time ago. 

It made it perfectly clear, yes. But it doesn't matter. It's not like Ahlf couldn't have taught her some self-defence, once the other kids attacked her. Couldn't have built up her endurance, strength, strength or agility (which would have been useful, considering what type of life they led). Or just teach MC about the world surrounding her, about this strange and unwelcoming country, its history or people. If not himself, then I'm sure there was at least one kind grandmother in the village. It just gives you some skills, some idea of what you are up against. The lack of any of this, suggests to me that Ahlf was unconcerned with keeping her safe, keeping her alive.  Especially considering his past (you mean to tell me that he wasn't aware of the possibility of his past catching up to them?) and the position that he had. You can keep someone away from something and yet give them some chance to succeed if your efforts are unsuccessful. This argument was however explained by the author (still idk how I feel abou it, but awkward daddy Ahlf seems like a real possibility).

The choices with Ahlf influence MC's behaviour, yes. But not the outcome. And you are supposed to shape the story through your choices. Now, I will acknowledge that most IF stories have some elements that are unchangeable and if this doesn't happen constantly or affects minor characters (Ahlf dies really early on, so let's call him a minor character) it's a-ok. Still, even a different letter for a defiant MC (the version we've got, if Syl is as defiant and violent maybe) and a cooperative, affectionate MC (telling her he loved her, that he wished for the relationship with her, but that was for the best) and an MC that is constantly scared would have been nice, that is all. 

It could be minor. Or it could be a huge deal. Some people would forget about this instantly. Some would hold a grudge forever. Some would keep wondering if that is how the prince sees them even a month, a year, a decade later. And we are talking about a kid who was belittled, neglected and/or ignored her whole life.

 The kicker is - they don't have to work together. Or at least not as equals. This particular relationship could take various forms, much like aby other in the game. But, at least at the time I stopped reading, nothing truly changes between the characters. Sure, we've got some different dialogue options, but it's not like they made a real difference. Maybe it changes later on, idk, I did not read the entire thing, which I think I've mentioned somewhere earlier? 

I wouldn't say that the points are terrible. I would say, however, that I expect different things from fiction than you do. I would say that I pay attention to different details than you do. And that we simply think and analyze differently. And I would say that I stopped reading.

Then again I may be wrong, you may be right and my whole line of reasoning is shit. Who knows? Defo not me, prolly not you, so I will leave it to the people bored enough to read this thread to decide.

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Since you stopped reading early on and there's only seven chapters it makes sense!

Again, notable skills ae throughout it, but a big one comes in chapter seven, I assume you didn't read that far.

Ahlf spends most of his time fishing to provide for him and the MC so he wouldn't have the time to teach them anything. There were NO kind grandma's or kind people in that prejudice village. The only knowledge MC got was from books that Ahlf owned.

There wasn't anybody else to take care of Irus after Ahlf died. There was no later, Irus needed a companion and MC needed to carry out their fathers mission. If MC didn't accompany Irus as his protector/ advisor there would be no reason to accompany him at all because he wouldn't need them. Irus came to the village seeking Ahlf not MC, but since Ahlf died MC was all he had. It's not like either of them had proper training since Irus wasn't raised to be king. 

Ahlf may have known the past would catch up with him, but if he did he likely would have tried to run with Irus and MC. He left his lil death note thinking more so if it happened not when it happened. If Ahlf had survived the village attack and escaped with Irus and MC, he would have started teaching them self defense and battle stuff then. All of that is gained through Oren, reading and experience though.

I will agree with you that the only time we've seen the non-character stats come into play is when you ask to learn about politics with Elora and you use that knowledge with the businessman Irus was hanging out with at the ball. This is only an early version so it will probably come into play later.

I'm responding with this all out of order but, the author could only make so many reactions. You could be indifferent, angry, sad, etc.. in response to the happenings. For example, after Ahlf dies, MC is sat at a river and you get to choose how they respond to his passing. I personally chose anger, and later (if you're not mean to Irus)he'll ask you how you felt about it. The emotions you chose at the river will come flooding back to you. This is minor but a consistent point!

When you say it influences MC's behavior bot not the outcome this is true, but nothing to do with MC'S choices. Take it like this, you have a crush on somebody who isn't attracted to you. You befriend them and try really hard to become more than friends but that just won't happen because they aren't attracted to you! No matter how had MC tries or doesn't tries, there will always be a wall in theirs and Ahlf father daughter relationship because Ahlf will not allow them to grow any closer to him.

The same thing goes for this debate I guess! I really enjoyed it though, but if you have different tastes then not much can be done, lol. I don't know if anybody will read this book of a thread but if they do then they might allow us some third party insight on this!

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I'm impressed with the use/choice of music - it's not amazing in its own right, but it works well as a background without being intrusive or becoming monotonous.

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I'm glad the music wasn't intrusive! I usually turn off music in IF because it feels that way πŸ˜…

Ah Etti. She's just a spinster and is technically older than most girls 'her age which means that they're in the same age range but Etti is far older than most.

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