Crown of Exile

Hello i wanted to ask how many chapters will the full game have? (Just a random question that i thought about rn and sorry if you already answered this question somewhere else or even here in the comments somewhere, also sorry for my grammar it may not be the best since English is not my first language)

Because you indicated you were hoping for feedback when you made the two chapters public: it seemed like an oversight that I could thwart the alliance with the nomads by murdering my duel opponent and then it… just not come up again. At all.

That was DELICIOUS! i got to both destiny with two mc and was shooked on both of them! Plot thickening! Even more! Lol.

you have my gratitude for allowing us to hate Salyra and love her despite everything and everything in between. I loved both routes. In both I can't hate Rana, but still its good that we can. I love this IF exactly for it allows mc many emotions or none at all. 

Our cousin is troubled young man and I hope that gentle approach to him will help... but I also don't think that this is always the answer. We'll see. I WAS HOPING THAT MY FAMILY JUST VISITING BUT ALAS this turn of events made my mc feral. Also Ama's initiative was not something I expected, and I loved uncle's reaction. I love him. I'm glad that mc can connect with that part of the family, I'm glad that mc can move on. It's not easy and not for everyone, but its here as an option and it's wonderful. 

As for romances IRUS I'VE MISSED YOU. still funny that he is the main RO for me. Well, what can I say, I'm here for trauma bonding (same parental situation! Same struggle) and for equally fun flirting. And devotion. And gay sex. I can go on like this.

Loved new information about world and our companions.

I'm glad that you had an opportunity to show us special content. Thank you very much! Will be here, waiting to buy full (eventually) game.

Loved the "new" chapters. Salyra hate was excellent. Only little issue i had was the scene where Rana is hiding from the bullies, i would have loved a way to simply leave without interacting, but that's just a minor issue.

Also few minor issues i found:

"Cotten" should be "cotton", unless it's a material i haven't heard about.

Save: https://gofile.io/d/uLagbk

Dena got wrong prounoun

save: https://gofile.io/d/sConi7

I think there is a word missing here

Save: https://gofile.io/d/iXFWqD

love this if so much you have no idea prince irus just does stuff to me. wishing men were real💔

anyways could someone send the link for “far away from home acoustic ver”because the links aren’t working for me:(( it’s so nice and beautiful I NEED IT

I really loved the story... One day I'll see the full story🙂‍↕️🌸

And thanks for the demonstration 💖

Ahhhh, catching up on the update was so exciting!! Thank you!! I'm so eager for what happens next 🙇🏻‍♀️

Wonderful news! Thank you! Will be here waiting for access to some chapters haha 🥰😊

I can't wait for the day the game fully out and I can finally buy them! Great story and I'm completely hooked up when I first download the demo version! 

hi,do you have a Steam page?

I've played the demo multiple times and I also follow your tumblr, but I've been so busy working I haven't had time to see about any new updates.

Dena.... is going to be a LI!?!?!? Wooooo!!!! I've loved him since he helped Aena (my MC) out when she was younger. Mwah! 

However, Irus will always have a special place in my heart. He's such a good LI. 

Now I'm off to play Sir Oren's route again! Lol. I may end up getting the patreon later on just to get the updates. XD But I will definitely be paying for the full IF once it's finished. :) 

amazing story, can't believe it took me playing like fifty other IFs to reach this lol

Definitely one of the best IF's I've ever played! I've been hooked on it for the past couple of days, and while it is unfortunate that the public demo only extends to Chapter 8, I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the chapters turn out!

(Yap session below, read at your own expense 🙂 )

As I stated previously, this is one of the IF's I've ever played! Everything, from the plot, to the music, and the writing was done to a T! I loved the descriptive words, and it was clear that you put a ton of effort into this IF, it puts most others on this website to shame.

As far as the characters (companions in specific) go, I absolutely loved their personalities, and I was conflicted as to who I should romance (at least in the early chapters, 3-4 I believe), since I liked Iri, Sir Oren, and Ellie, both as romance options and characters! (Iri my beloved 😇 I didn't have it in me to flirt with all three, it felt wrong 😭)

I could honestly go on and on about everything that I liked about the game, but if I did, this comment would probably take up half the page. But it was worth every hour of my time, and I hope that I'll be able to buy the full game when it gets released! You're a great author, and I hope nothing but the best for you!

hold onnn this game comes with music? lorddd i'm already hooked !!! trust me, i WILL be buying this game once it fully comes out 

Loved this story, Saw the fact that chap8 is the last free one and was wondering. How close is the game to completion and how much will it eventually be?

Absolutely wonderful story. I will be awaiting your next update.

I've never been as addicted to an IF as I was to this one. I'm truly obsessed. Irus has my heart ❤️.

About our mother, I just can't swallow what she does. I mean, no visits? She may have sent letters and everything, but like, how about you show up for your son maybe?? She had enough time to start another family, it's not possible that she didn't have time to give us some sign. I'm not going to blame my stepsister or my mother's husband, after all they had nothing to do with her decision not to look for us. My sister is lovely and my mother's husband seems like a nice person, so I can have a friendly relationship with him. But honestly I don't see myself forgiving my mother, like, you haven't looked for me this whole time but you want me to be completely open now that you've shown up? No, I feel too frustrated just thinking about it. Besides, if I can't accept this, I wonder what will happen to our uncle, cousin, and grandmother. They all still think about her, but she never gave them a single sign. Anyway, I'm just really frustrated with her haha, mainly because she doesn't seem to accept Irus very much, and if she says something against it, then we're really going to have problems 🗣️.

I saw that the public demo will no longer be updated until the IF is completed. Unfortunately I can't pay the patreon to read more, so I'll have to be patient until the completion 🙏. Which makes me wonder if you have already decided how many chapters IF will have? I would really like to know that. I really loved the story, the characters, just everything. I wish you much success and please continue creating more IFs, you are very talented.

All the best to you ~❤️

Have you considered commissioning an actual artist to draw your character art instead of AI art?

Hey the story is coming along well 😀, I accidentally sent an unfinished bug report 🤣 I'm killing myself laughing 

A very well thought out plot. I am pleased to know that the female ROs have a similar level of depth in them as the male ones. With so many otome games filling up this genre, I was apprehensive at first. It still saddens me that the 2nd female RO was very late in her appearance, and I had to spend my time stuck with 2 dudes, with Elora as the only exit lol. But I appreciate the game regardless.

One more thing I liked that you didn't force us to reconcile with Salyra as a good old protagonist. She's a hypocrite and I enjoyed tormenting her. I liked the morally ambiguous Dena as well.

As others have pointed out, a breakup system would be good if you decide to put it on. I liked my grandmother's family too, she was quite supportive :). Thanks for writing this game, Ramona. I was saddened when it ended, and I look forward for more :D.

In the future, if we're courting someone... can we dump them to date Dena?

I am thrilled to have found this game, and I am eagerly awaiting the finished product! (And Dena's route!) Found some typos that I will submit to the form.

This question plagues me. Is it spelled Prince [ayrus] or Prince [eerus]

I have a question: Is Dena a RO or not?

(For some reason i still haven't played it again to know that 😅 so I'm asking instead, even tho I'm going to play the game again-)

May I ask Ramona something? Has the queen Elora had a lover before? And who took the queen Elora's first time? If it's not both, then she gave her first time to the main character? I'm really curious And would like to know the answer. I don't really like the main character's wife having her first time with someone else, But I will accept with the answer I received if possible.

Who would be that lucky? Don't tell me its MC's cousin....I will not accept that answer. I wouldn't buy the game if it was that bad. I can't accept that her first time isn't the main character. I've read more than 1000 manhua(Chinese manga) and it's not strange if I didn't accept.

 Queen Erola didn't say it was her first time and said to MC "you could have spent your first time with anyone" Which makes me even more curious. Plus, it was easy to insert without pain. Or is the main character's thing too small? If the answer I get is that her first time is MC. I will definitely buy the full game just for Queen Erola. If I get an answer that would be great.

This is my Last Comment. Let's be honest, the love story between the MC's mother and her new husband is very trash. The reason she loves him because he's different from everyone else, that's all. makes me think of the anime named "Erased" 

But in this game, the MC's father betrays his country, betrays everyone, Sacrificed everything, for her alone. and what her new husband does is just different from everyone else....WTF! Poor MC's father. MC's father didn't deserve that. He deserve better. I include our MC.

"I will miss you dearly," Mama whispers. "I will pray to Ehulla to guide you safely on your journey, Rubari." You open your mouth to respond, but Mama turns away first.

Not even a single comfort. There should be an option to say "You are so busy feeling guilty and sadness that you forget that I am suffering too. You keep thinking that you sacrificed so much to protect me but you forget that I also suffer. You never think about the consequences of your actions, even though every action you take only makes things worse. "  I want to know how his mother will react.

 She always walks away from our MC, There wasn't even any comfort. She often acts sad after the MC tells the truth About how much her actions affected him. Everything she did is to protect MC? Everything she did to the MC just made the MC suffer, so what now? He still had to fight against what his mother was trying to fight. Everything that the MC's mother does is in vain. All in order to leave the MC and go have a new family. I, who played the main character, did not accept her new husband. I really wanted the MC's mother to feel more and more guilty Until she regrets all her choices and all her actions. She shouldn't have a new family. That's what our MC wants. 

"She was a blessing when everything seemed terrible," Danzor murmurs. "We are grateful to have had Rana." -Chapter 7 Do you think I'm stupid? How many times have you explode inside my mama? I guess he had too much fun with the MC's mama and forgot about protection or explode outside😂 The main character also says "A blessing?" you scoff. "There is nothing miraculous about bedding each other."" -Chapter 7 and I agreed with Rubari. I'm beginning to not be sure if I can continue to trust Mama.

 It should be made into a meme on reddit if there's a community for this game out there.

May I ask who the woman on the cover is? if she is a character in this game, who is she? Can someone please tell me which game she is from? And what is her name? The visual style reminds me of a lot of games. 

It would have been better if there had been a picture of the main character standing alone among hundreds of corpses with his back to the camera, showing the character who had been through a lot. Along with a picture of him as an innocent and happy 5 year old, he was happy with his mother. Compare with the first picture. You will see a lot of character development and more clarity. "this is the masterpiece" The cover of the game is very well made and fits the story perfectly. I never thought I'd find a good game like this. 

My first thought when I found out that Mama already move on:

"I'll burn this planet down." along with music "Me and The Devil. Walking side by side🎶" I rate this game 11/10. I accidentally pressed in this game. who would have thought that I would end up with a masterpiece? I was so enjoying the story that I forgot to look at the time.

This Game is The Masterpiece(Every game I like is a masterpiece lol.) 

 If you can make your readers Shedding tears, you've succeeded. "So much has happened in the years that you have been apart. The woman you thought you knew as a child is not the woman you know now." -from Chapter 6 and I Agreed. I was so angry that no matter what, I had to choose the option of severing ties with Rubari's mother and living with the queen (future wife). It would be better not to mess with a mother who forgets her own child. Rubari is no longer the same person as the 5 yo kid from that day. He is no longer the same as he was then. He's been through a lot. the character development was great. And the character with no development is trash but This game has only good characters, especially Rubari. I hope he can fight 100 people by himself in the future Because the MC has enough or too much potential in many paths, such as being a great swordsman. There are very few options for practicing swordmanship skills. But at least The MC got to spend time with the Queen.

His greatest feats:

1. He almost single-handedly defeated the trained Blood Guard with no experience. 

2. Have a child with the queen (Soon) hehhe 

3. Nothing, because the main character is too weak to receive the 3rd achievement. If he can't protect himself, how can he protect the people he loves? haha.

hi Ramona,

was thinking of supporting you and the game on patreon, but i have some questions:

will talking about the 5€ tier

1.) are the once-a-month sidestories retroactive avaiable? so will i have access to all past stories if i support now?

2.) commisions are like: you ask an artist for something & pay, then the artist deliever, right? if so, what does early access mean in that context?

im sure you hear it enough, but it still amazes me how captivating your writing is. last time i played was when chapter 8 was released, and 1.) im sure i could roughly retell the story from memory and 2.) can still "conjure up" the hate i had towards the mother of MC.

AT LAST  I FOUND THIS, YOU DON'T KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TRYING TO FIND THE GAME YOU'VE PLAYED BUT FORGOT THE NAME

just finished all the current chapters and i definitely enjoyed it! i can say the strained relationship dynamic between the MC and our mother hit CLOSE to home so i could relate. 

i am deeply in love with irus as well <3

MIRTH.

Love the story! Ellie is best girl! And Irus is such a bro! Looking forward to another playthrough with Anu after I finish my current one

I haven't played the game much yet but the story is incredible! I just reached Chapter 2 and im already enjoying it! Keep up the great work!

Kind of a spoiler

In the first 7 chapters i was wondering: Are we ever going to meet D (I will call em D cause the gender can be different for some players) ? And when we did my reaction was just 😲(Wha-) 😀(D!!!) 😯 (Wait what I wasn't expecting them to appear-) 😀 (But I'm happy for that)🤨 (Wait so D Is actually beck for some time?!)😁jsijwjdh (awesome)

also i knew i would get addicted to this game, the writing, character, drama! Love it so much, I want to play more but sadly i can't download the game. It was fun playing the 1st chapters tho, Maybe in soms years i will come upon this game again and download it since the plot is fascinating and the characters are well made :)