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What a chapter! I'm completely in love with the characters and the plots!!

And what in the word was THAT scene with Irus!! i'm deep in love!

You're an amazing writter and i'm looking forward to seeing what will happen in the story!!  <3

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I'm so glad you enjoyed the game 😊🌼 Thank you for your support!

Glad you enjoyed Irus' scene 😉

Love this game! Enough to actually report bugs I found through your form-- usually I don't bother but this game is so great I had to actually help out for once 😆!

Gotta shout out Elora! I'm playing a shy MC with her and the way she enjoys flustering her is so cute! Can't wait to spend more time with her. 

Chapter 5 was fantastic, I appreciate you let us really choose how we felt about things. I had a feeling this would happen, I'm actually happy about it and looking forward to seeing how things pan out.

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Thank you so much for playing 💖😊 And sending in bug reports is very helpful because my testers aren't able to find every bug encountered, so it dies help me a lot!

I'm really happy you're enjoying Queen Elora's romance route! You will be able to lock-in your relationship with her in Chapter 6 😋

You'll definitely always get a choice to decide how you're feeling with things, especially when it involves the MC's parents 👀

Thank you for your support 🌼

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AINT NO WAY THIS WAS JUST THE DEMO. THAT WAS TOO GOOD. Irus is bae btw idc what you say. 

now I gotta do all the parts..

dw.. Irus will always be in my heart <3

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It really is just the demo 😋 There are 12 planned chapters in total and an epilogue, so roughly around 7 more chapters to go.

Thank you so much for playing! I hope you enjoy the other romance routes as much as you enjoyed Irus' route 💖

Thank you! i look forward to more

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I've been keeping an eye on the progress of this for a while, but I definitely enjoyed the lastest update. I wanna thank you for giving the mc to be distant or angry about the revelation. Too often I see people who makes mc's way too forgiving and this was a a breath of fresh air. If anything, I hope the mc can tell the mother she's going too fast with "Oh hey, let's introduce you to my family. Let's be whole." when the mc revealed they lost their father in a violent and traumatic way.

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Thank you for playing! And I'm really grateful for your support 💖

I really dislike forced forgiveness or happy reconciliations with MC's and people who have hurt them in some way or form, so I knew that I was going to let players act as antagonistic as they wanted to 😅

You will get a chance to tell Salyra how you feel in Chapter 6, and can choose how much you want to interact with her new family independently from whether or not you cut ties with Salyra.

Thank you again and I'm really glad you're enjoying the game 🌼

Yes! Forced forgiveness in games like these is a huge pet peeve of mine. I don't really know if any explanation would be good enough for forgiveness in my eyes, but I also don't think it's her daughter's fault. Would be cool if we could have little to no more interaction with Salyra but still be a good brother. 

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You will be able to have a relationship with Rana separately from Salyra 😋 Of course, Salyra might get a little hopeful that the MC would be willing to reconcile with her but that's what antagonistic responses are for 😅

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i started reading thinking it would be a short demo, and ended up spending like 7ish hours bingereading it. i cried about 3 times throughout. what a game. IRUS MY BELOVED!!!!!
p.s.: i am so sleep deprived rn i almost ended up commenting a major spoiler by accident 😳 oops. so let's just say the last chapter REALLY fucked me up

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Thank you so much for playing! I forget how long the game is when you play it - to me it feels like an hour long but that's because I'm writing it opposed to playing it 😅

I'm glad you enjoyed Irus' route! He is quite a great RO 😉

That latest chapter was not the last of the angst, prepare for more in Chapter 6 👀 Thank you again fir your support 💖

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Man, the last chapter actually left me in tears.

MC's mom leaving them in a town so openly hateful of their people and building another family while MC had to grow up with a man they barely knew, in a town that was repulsed by her mere existence? I actually felt the betrayal, and honestly I don't think there's a good enough reason for my MC to forgive her, even if it's their mother. Actually, especially because she's their mother but she abandoned them like that. I think I'll be left in tears next chapter too, BUT I NEED CLOSURE FROM THIS LET MY MC ANGRILY YELL AT THEIR MOTHER I BEG YOU

I really loved the story. I'm usually slow to play text-based games like this because of my ADHD, but the plot was so interesting that I found myself actually immersed. I love the characters so much, I can barely stop myself from flirting with all of them, though Iris has a special place in my heart. 

Really excited to play chapter 6! (please let me rage at Salyra please please please)

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Thank you so much for playing ❤ I'm so happy the chapter could make you feel so strongly.

You will definitely get a chance to get some answers, though detailed answers hinges on whether or not you actively pursue a relationship with Salyra and the rest of her family 😅

I'm so grateful that you're enjoying the game, especially the ROs 😊 Irus is my fave too!

There are already a lot of angry responses written for Chapter 6 and I have to admit, I teared up for a few so more angst ahead 👀

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this interactive fiction is SO GOOD I'M SCREAMING RN IS AMAZING AND I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEW CHAPS IN THE FUTURE! And thank you for giving us this amazing entertainment and I wish u good luck and stay safe dear author ^^

OH AND IRUS HAS BEEN MY FAVORITE SO FAR😯

Thank you so much for playing and I'm so glad that you're enjoying the game 😊 Irus is quite fun to write so I'm glad you're enjoying his character. Thank you for your support 💖

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The way that this game and Irus have a fierce chokehold on me 😭😭 i love this so much

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Thank you so much for playing and I'm so grateful for your support! Expect more Irus soon ❤️️

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What did i do to deserve you 😭 ✨, dear author? 

This chapter's plot twists are unexpected. I want to cry from happiness since this chapter was so fantastic!

Oh, but wait, the angst in here...I'm liking it so much I can't even begin to explain it 🌝, and Bloody hell! mama isn't going anywhere until or unless my MC gets answers, and she isn't going to warm up to mama anytime soon. 

Imagine ahlf suddenly reappearing...oh dear my soul shall fly away :( I miss him.

I had a variety of conflicting emotions after reading the reunion scene with Mama. The chp was truly beautifully written.

Oh, do I really need to tell you how much I love Irus💕✨. The way he treats the MC, and the scenes with him are consistently refreshing and delightful. (Sometimes they are way too sweet, that I have to cover up my face to stop blushing 😭 😉 but I love it)

I'm excited for more chapters with him. (Ofc no rush 😌)

I value your time and effort 💞 tysm.

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Thank you so much for your lovely comment 💖😊 It really made my day!

I'm so glad you enjoyed the plot twist! It was one that I had been planning for a very long time so it was quite enjoyable to write.

I'm currently working on Chapter 6, so rest assured that you will be getting your answers 😉

Ahlf is unfortunately not coming back, but you will get mentions of him in Chapter 6 when you finally sit down to talk to Salyra.

I'm so happy you enjoyed Irus' scene! I tried to convey his emotions for the MC without making it seem too cheesy, so it's good to know you enjoyed it 😊 

Thank you so much for playing and for your support!

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I'm happy to see that my words were able to brighten your day💕, 

I'm quite eager to learn the answers in the upcoming chapter 🤭.

There isn't a single scene with Irus that I didn't enjoy✨; it's impossible not to. 

Rip ahlf :(

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Dang, that was so good. My MC definitely felt betrayed. And reasonably so imo. But it seems after every chapter I just become more and more in love with Elora 😍.

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I'm so happy that Elora is getting some love! She's just so different to write from the others so it's good to know that people like her 😊

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Im not a simp or anything, but Irus could run me over with Crown and I would thank him- 

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🤣🤣🤣 This made me laugh! Irus will happily do anything the MC asked of him 😉

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Yeah! none of us are simping over irus🫣🤭

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man the betrayal. i love the angst so bad i want more akjdhakjsh

Glad you liked the angst! Thank you for playing 😊

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Mama making cry over here- but it's FINE


its actually not fine, DID YOU NOT TRY TO COME BACK FOR ME MAMA?? I DONT NEED SLEEP I NEED ANSWERS

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You'll get your answers in Chapter 6 👀😆

i cried too, so conflicted

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Lots of angst ahead 😔

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I agree with you! No one is going anywhere without ANSWERS, especially you MAMA 🙂

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Woah the plot thickens!!!! so many things happened in this chapter I can't even describe it, I just know that it was amazing. Great writing, as always. Thank you for another wonderful chapter author 💞

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Thank you for playing and I'm really glad you enjoyed it! 💖💖

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Not me fangirling while reading the NSFW scene with Irus

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I hope you enjoyed it 😋😆

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thank you for the irus food <3 every new chapter is a chance to fall in love with irus all over again. 

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Thank you for playing 😊 And I'm really happy to know you're enjoying Irus' romance as much as I enjoy writing it!

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I went with the prince and chapter 5 had me blushing and kicking my legs while giggling, I'm highkey simping Irus is so cute 😭 i wanna draw my Mc and him together

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Thank you for playing and I'm so happy you enjoyed Irus' route ❤ 😊🌼 Please do feel free to draw your MC and Irus! I'd love to see them together 😆 And if you're on Tumblr, I'll be happy to add it to the fan works section of the game 😊

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crying because my saves are gone. heart beating faster cause i rember i exported my saves?! oh shart nevermind crying again.
i was immediately hit by the emotions of: ayo new RO?!?! and damm that sidebar 🤤 sadly missed the joy of chapter 4 release from the rookie mistake of not following you
i shall romance irus again... or not... Also on my first play i was *kinda* expecting Irus to be some spoiled brat or smthn. it was such a delight that i was wrong (i would've dated him either way tho ngl)

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Unfortunately, I usually add and tweak variables with every new update so it means that you'll have to restart the game with each update 😅

And thank you so much for playing! I'm so grateful for your support 💖

Yes, there is a new RO - Anu who's brash, hot-headed and quite flirty if pursued by the player character.

A lot of people said the same thing about Irus and I realise that from the outset, he does give off spoilt prince vibes 😆 but I dislike spoilt, arrogant ROs and so Irus ended up being quite different from his original version.

I'd suggest holding off to play until tomorrow because Chapter 5 is being released then 😋

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The way sir oren shyness has me in a chokehold- I cant wait for the next update.

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Thanks for playing 💖 Sir Oren does get a little bolder deeper into the relationship, but he is quite shy when it comes to romance 😄 Next update is on 1st February.

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This was fantastic. Definitely one of my favorite IF games right now. Cant wait to find out what happens next. Queen Elora is life :') 

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Thank you so much for playing and I'm so happy that you're enjoying it! 💖😊

Chapter 5 will be out on the 1st of February, so just a few days more 😊

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I was expecting this to be a short demo but it had four complete chapters and I cannot stop replaying it!! So well written and had such great characters! Excited for the next part to become available. ❤ 

I was wondering though, can we not choose to be with the other RO's yet?

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Thank you so much for playing and I'm so happy you enjoyed it! 🌼😊

Currently, you can lock-in your romance with Prince Irus. The other ROs will have different lock-in points in further chapters. If you intend on pursuing them, you'll need to avoid locking in a relationship with Prince Irus so that you'll receive the option when it comes up.

Thank you again for your support! 💖

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Oh I see. I tried pursuing the others but I always get the option for locking in a relationship with Prince Irus, which I don't really mind tbh. 😅 

Thank you sm for responding! 😊

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No problem! If you want extra content on the ROs, you can always check out my Tumblr. 🌼

I'm curious what program did you use to make this? This has inspired me and I want to try my hand at this kind of game.

I've used Twine to create the game, and Crown of Exile is written with the sugarcube format in Twine 😊

It's basic HTML and CSS for coding if you're starting out and I find it quite simple (coming from a non-coding background) once you get the hang of it 🌼

Thank you 😊 I really appreciate it and appreciate you being so interactive it's refreshing

You're welcome! I look forward to any future games you might create 💖

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Yes, hello I don't usually comment on these sights but your game grabbed my interest when scrolling through itch, the story was good and I enjoyed the romances (and that they do not feel forced). But I have reached the end of the game currently in the free browser version i await when more comes out. (In short good job )

Thank you so much for playing and I'm so happy you're enjoying it 😊 💗 It means a lot to have your support and hopefully the next chapter will be posted by February.

Cool I look forward to it 👍

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oh no!! my saves are gone!!! (immediately replays for the 7th time) >:)

Sorry about that! 💖 Unfortunately by the time chapter 5 comes again, old saves won't work on account of new variables added in 😬

ill accept any excuse to replay again haha. don't worry about it!! thank you for all your hard work!! 💖💖

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Thank you for playing 🌼💖

I went to replay this even though I had just played this when the new chapter came out and now I lost all my saves :,)

I'm sorry 🌷🌼😞 I posted a bug fix demo, so you'd have to restart the game anyway because of old bugs 😬 Hope it wasn't too much trouble to go through it again!

just finished my first playthrough and goddamn why did i drop this 😭. i remember playing this when its still at its early stage but i think prince irus kinda made me go sour and im like ill just play this again after i find time but i saw that you released chap 4 and saw a kiss scene with irus and i kinda got tempted lmao. im so glad i came back because this is art. i love it all, the characters, the conflict, how you handle relationships and beliefs and all that is just so well done.

also, my first impression with irus back then was so wrong with me thinking he is a spoiled brat lmao. he has truly stolen my heart 😔. now im off to romance oren and make my blushing mess of an mc fall in love again.

also, you made me cry in a couple of scenes there. while reading my mind just kept adding into the angst with pops there that i just had to shed a tear. yummy IF you got here, gonna give it MASSIVE chomp

Thank you so much for giving the game another try and I am so happy that you enjoyed it 😊💖 It means a lot to know that you were able to feel all the emotions I tried to convey. I always feel like it's not emotional enough, so it's really satisfying to learn that players are feeling these feelings 😅

Prince Irus is portrayed as being spoilt because that's him at the beginning - a spoilt prince 😂 but he is quite sweet once he opens up to the MC, so I'm glad he stole your heart.

Thank you for taking the time to send in such a wonderful comment! I'm so grateful for your support and I do hope you enjoy Oren's route 😋

Absolutely enthralled by the story so far, made me feel so many emotions. Little bit dissapointed without to many spoilers,  such a skilled fisherman not teaching his son to defend himself in such a dangerous environment. Though i do understand a few reasons for and against.

Thank you so much for playing and I'm so happy that you enjoyed the game 😊Ahlf certainly had some reservations about teaching the MC any fighting skills - a lot of it would bring up unwanted memories of his past and he was also fed up of all the fighting he had done, so he thought that he could at least live in relative peacefulness with the MC 😅Unfortunately life had other plans for him and the MC.

Fantastic, Thank you so much. I will donate when I can and look forward to the release of the rest of the story!

Thank you! 💖

Do you have a Patreon or a preferred method of support?

I'm pretty active on Patreon, but please don't feel obligated to support 🌼😊 

Does praying and making a wise at the temple change anything in the story?

No, that's more for role-playing purposes 😊 If your character is more spiritual, they have the option to pray and if not, they can make a wish - or don't do either.

Bug. I can't get past a certain point. After waking in the temple with the Prince, there is no 'next' button after this paragraph: 

You doubt that you will have the chance to return to the temple any time soon, if at all. It provided you much needed shelter and refuge when you needed it the most.

(If it helps I petted Crown's mane and went outside and picked the couldn't breathe options.) 

Thank you for this! I'll definitely check it out and hopefully have it fixed by the next update. Sorry about that 🌼

THIS IS SO CUTE!!!! i love it so much, you are such a talented writer and i am literally Dying. it's so adorable and i love this IF soooo much

Thank you so much for playing and I'm so grateful for your support 🌼😊 Glad you're enjoying the game!

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The update was truly wonderful! Currently, the plot is taking some intriguing turns.

Once again.... Irus, you have my entire heart 😮‍💨✨.

Dear author, You have such a gift for creating romantic scenes <3 and You have such a beautiful game cover, I must say. 

I enjoy reading everything you write, and I admire your efforts!

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Thank you so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed the update 😊 

Irus has most of the players fighting over him and considering this was originally a story opposed to an IF idea, Irus was the main RO so he is the most fleshed out in the game 😅

I'm glad you're enjoying the romance! I love romance games, but there's never enough romance for my tastes so I was eager to include as much romance as I could 😅 You can expect smooches in almost every romantic interaction going forward.

Thank you again for your lovely comment and support 🌼💖 It really does put a smile on my face 😊

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I adore how our MC found remnants of their family after so long. Its such a nice event considering the rampant themes of loss and abandonment in most adventure stories <3

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I'm glad you thought so! I knew that I wanted the MC to get some happiness during their journey, especially considering the life they've led so far 😊 Thank you for playing and for your support! 💖

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I really love this story. The character development ist great. The MC is very well built, I love the fact that we're able to play them as children. Not many IF I've encountered did that, which is a real treat :)

I really like the building trust between the MC and Irus. Can't wait for chapter 5 ! :)

Thank you so much for playing and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 💖😊

It's good to know that you liked the MC's childhood - it was a necessary part of the game, so it's good to know you enjoyed it.

Thank you for your support!

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am i doing something wrong? i can't put my custom name because there's nowhere to click to confirm. i end up having to choose the 4 given names. i'm on phone :( 

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When playing on mobile, you'll need to hit the enter button after typing in your character's name. You can also open the game on desktop mode in your browser and hit the enter button.

Type your character's name first:



Then, hit enter:


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i did! multiple times, even. but it just stays on that screen, nothing hapens :(

That's very weird 🤔 are you using the apk version or browser version? I haven't tested out the apk version properly so it might be an issue with that. But on the browser version, it should work because that's what I tested it on. If you are able to, I'd suggest using a pc/desktop to play and I'll try to figure out how to make a confirm button by the next update so the issue doesn't persist 😊

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Yes I'm having this problem too on the browser version via my phone :( I guess I'll go with Aena :D

That's very strange because it works on my phone fine 🤔 I'll have to get a confirm button working

i have this problem on both apk and browser version.

I'll hopefully can get a confirm button for the next update so you won't have this problem 😊

Thank you very much for brightning up my whole week with this wonderful story.. Thank you so much lady..

Thank you for playing and I'm glad that the update could brighten your week 💖😊 

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I loved this! however, I noticed that (SPOILER) in escaping the barge, Crown wasn't mentioned? was he left behind or was it just accidentally omitted? 

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Thank you for playing and I'm so glad you liked it!

Crown wasn't mentioned because I left out a few scenes at the end of the chapter to keep with a monthly update schedule. He will be mentioned again in Chapter 5, but rest assured that he is quite safe and well. I'll likely go back to add in those scrapped scenes when I start edits 😊

Oh thank god i was so worried!!! ;-; My sweet baby Crown...

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Don't worry, I never include any animal harm in my writing 😋 So Crown will get his happily ever after regardless of what happens.

Amazing! Love this one. Thanks for the chapter 💜

Thank you for playing and glad you enjoyed it! 😊

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Omgg, i loved chapter 4!! I'm playing Irus's and Oren's route and i just can't- the romance!!--

*Faints*  

I can't wait for the next update ^_^ 

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The romance scenes are my favourite parts to write 😅 I'm so glad you're enjoying both of the guys' routes! Hopefully chapter 5 will come by early Feb if all goes to plan 😊 Thank you for playing! 

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I am inlove with this so far. Thank you for great writing. And lovable characters.

I'm so glad you're enjoying the game 💖 And thank you for playing!

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Chapter 4!!! Thank you for the food!!! ;w; Irus my beloved... don't worry. My goblin of an MC refuses to abandon you! You're stuck with him now... 


Never disappointed when theres an update. ^^ Can't wait for the next one!!

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I'm so glad you enjoyed the update! 💖😊 Irus is honestly the best 👌 Thank you so much for playing and leaving a comment! It means so much to me 💖🌼

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